A note to Ted Mark:
Thank you for the clean-up job, but there are a few typos yet, like ?rook? for ?took?, here:

Quote Originally Posted by girlsfightlover View Post
Wanda took the red and black sneakers from her beaten rival as well as she rook the ripped tank top as a trophy. She also took her mother?s gun before she disappeared towards the house, towards her room. .......
A suggestion to the Author:

Quote Originally Posted by girlsfightlover View Post
She didn?t care if her father, her 13 year old twin sisters or someone else would find the beaten woman. She had made her decision and she had proved that she had got what was needed to deal with the consequences. That was what mattered to her now. And damn, where was a big cock once you needed one she thought, feeling her soaking wet cunt.......
Thank you for the good scenario. But you are not going to leave Wanda in the nature, all wet and alone, are you? I bet she bunks with a cocky cowboy in the nearest tavern, only to be raised by noon by the arrival of the rest of her family, all armed with guns - yes, even that lecherous younger sisters learned how to use a revolver witn the Ashlington Hellcats. Several combinations of guns versus knives, and male vs. male or female... You have the material for a series, here! Go ahead and write in your broken English - I started like that too. There's always a sympathetic Ted around the corner of the house to polish the grammar!